NSFW - Sarah and Rachel

39 public posts in this discussion.

Post 1

attended a glamour workshop today in sydney, I already knew a bit of the stuff but the teachers were awesome and so were the models. learnt a lot.

Here is my first edited image from the shoot.

[Image: http://i67.photobucket.com/albums/h301/insanedaniel/Sarah%20and%20Rachel/IMG_7819.jpg]

[Image: http://i67.photobucket.com/albums/h301/insanedaniel/Sarah%20and%20Rachel/IMG_7809edit2.jpg]
just FYI, here is the same shot without editing.
[Image: http://i67.photobucket.com/albums/h301/insanedaniel/Sarah%20and%20Rachel/IMG_7809UNedit.jpg]

just to show you all what I'm doing. (Blemishes, levels, liquefy on hips, arms, breasts & armpits, soft light layers, red towel, curves, eyes, lips.)
editing took about an hour for this shot, I don't mind though because she is a good base to start from, and I need the practice.

Just FYI also, these models are both Ralph/FHM models, the other girl I'm posting being a national finalist for ralph swimwear model of the year.

just shows that these magazines pretty much manufacture all their girls in photoshop.

[Image: http://i67.photobucket.com/albums/h301/insanedaniel/Sarah%20and%20Rachel/_MG_7774edit2.jpg]

Post 2

I am disappointed by your use of the NSFW tag.

Post 3

dick. eat. now.

Post 4

I have to say that I too, was a little let down. NSFS mebbe.

Post 5

ok fine, change it then. tag is for better safe than sorry.

Post 6

lots more coming btw, only had time to do one so far

Post 7

wtf is wrong with her legs ?

Post 8

They're closed?

Post 9

Quote from jimmy;383512:
They're closed?

Love it...

Post 10

Nice work dan..

Post 11

Quote from jimmy;383512:
They're closed?

Quite possibly post of the year.

Post 12

vote +1

Post 13

I'm confused what type of aesthetic are you aiming for in the shots?

Post 14

go jimmy go :D

Post 15

I totally understand your perspective but not 'shopping these too much as respect toward a natural looking female form. I can also see you're trying to shy away from the "plastic" Photoshop we're used to.

There are things that you still need to work on in my opinion. In the 3rd shot there are creases coming down from her collar bone to her breasts. I think these need to be dulled. I'm not saying remove them, but they certainly can be backed off contrast-wise. They're distracting... The fourth girl needs the veins in her thighs cleaned up. It's an obvious side-affect of it being a little cold where she got undressed. She wouldn't have them if she was outside in the warm and sun. When you're doing this stuff, you want the best side of the girl, even if she's not exuding it on the day. If things are unbecoming, then just dull them... There's a big difference between trying to draw out the best in your models through Photoshop, and actually making stuff up (ie. what everyone else does). Do you know where I'm coming from?

I also urge you not to forget, that in most cases your photos will end up representing a product. If the campaign doesn't have a gritty feel, things like the scar on below the girls belly button will need to be removed. It all depends on what angle the campaign in coming from I guess. If she was dressed up in boxing shit for example, it'd definitely stay. There's a big difference between totally manufacturing a girl who can't exist, and just removing small elements that can distract from the subject... in this case pretty girls.

Post 16

Oh and also keep in mind when considering your approach, that there faces are already "pre-Photoshopped".

:P

Post 17

another one,

[Image: http://i67.photobucket.com/albums/h301/insanedaniel/Sarah%20and%20Rachel/IMG_7832edit1.jpg]

Thanks a lot for the CC GI, means a lot. need to learn to pay attention to the detail a bit more. spent about 2 hours on this photo, she has a LOT of little freckles.

Post 18

experimenting with the last one a little. wasn't really happy with it.

[Image: http://i67.photobucket.com/albums/h301/insanedaniel/Sarah%20and%20Rachel/IMG_7832croptat.jpg]

Post 19

freckles can be hot

Post 20

normally I would agree, but not for these types of shot imo.

Post 21

Did you notice that there's lots of light on her stomach and not enough everywhere else? Stomach is perfect contrast but the rest looks way dark/flat.

I'm quite happy to show you a few Photoshop tricks to fix this quickly if you like. I'll just send you the PSD and you can see what I've done? Up to you obviously.

;)

Post 22

for sure mate, I will take any help/learning I can get from anywhere.

Post 23

new one
[Image: http://i67.photobucket.com/albums/h301/insanedaniel/Sarah%20and%20Rachel/_MG_7770.jpg]

Post 24

Same thing here man. Use the tips I emailed you on this one. It'll work well because basically below the bra is almost bang on, but the top is blown out.

Post 25

[Image: http://i67.photobucket.com/albums/h301/insanedaniel/Sarah%20and%20Rachel/_MG_7770edit2.jpg]

Post 26

I'd still lighten the bottom half a bit.

How do you calibrate your screen? What screen do you use?

Post 27

ergh, don't ask mate, they are on the list of things to get. uncalibrated cheap 22" chimei TN panel atm. sorely sorely need better + calibration.

Post 28

Quote from Insanedan;383561:
ergh, don't ask mate, they are on the list of things to get. uncalibrated cheap 22" chimei TN panel atm. sorely sorely need better + calibration.

Jesus titty fucking christ. Buy one of these. Now. Starve or something. :P

Check out the Dell U2410. With the readily-available 15% off coupon it's around $680.

There are also 22" and 23" IPS panels in the business section. Can't vouch for them though. Maybe check some reviews.

I'd be paying for this before business cards or anything. Your monitor is obviously calibrated too dark by the look of most of your photos. I don't think you're seeing the details in the shadows you should either. I wouldn't even bother trying to calibrate the Chimei tbh.

Post 29

+1

Post 30

Needs more vagina.

Post 31

love your work dan

Post 32

Quote from Milenko;383596:
Needs more vagina.

Pretty sure there's already enough cunts in this thread to sink a battleship.

Post 33

[Image: http://www.insanephotography.com.au/gallery/08.jpg]

Post 34

OK thanks for the CC guys, will fix the nose :P

Post 35

A

Post 36

With regards to monitors....

DELL Ultrasharp U2311 23"W HD Monitor $296.63 - IPS 1920x1080 - OzBargain

IPS panel for $296 deliverated, it's only 16:9 though, 1920x1080.

Post 37

thats a freaking hot price for that monitor....

Post 38

uh, you made the nose absolutely horrible. MJ would have been proud.

Post 39

Thats what my wife said too, straight off the bat. Awful job with the nose, everything else is good.