it's a work it progress - crit it :)
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[Image: http://fs6.deviantart.com/i/2005/037/9/0/marginalised__45_by_smiddy.jpg]
marginalised .45
14 public posts in this discussion.
Post 2
It’s not something I would be interested in or able to create, nor my style of art.
But I absolutely love it, nice job smiddy.
Be sure to keep tinkering with graphics and art cause I think you have a talent that not all of us are fortunate to have. Don’t waste it :)
And again nice piece.
Post 3
Link am busted
Edit: NM second link worked and nice work...wish I had some graphical ability.
Post 4
Thankies :)
Post 5
Nice piece smiddy!
I dont think you will get much art critique from these forums, apart from maybe rec, ruin and the like, but thats alright ;)
I quite like it mate, looks sweet.
The only think i dont like is the title, that word is over-used in art :P
Post 6
Is it supposed to mean something or just look cool?
Post 7
I think it's just supposed to look cool. He's accomplished that quite well.
Wd Smiddy. Not quite my preferred style... but it does look good either way :)
Post 8
looks like something i'd see on a poster at school, or on a shirt from stocks
not my thing, but looks good nonetheless (Y)
Post 9
Quote from ruin:
Is it supposed to mean something or just look cool?
it means something - if you look hard enough you can find out @.@
Post 10
smiddy is torn between two lovers... neither of which know his true feelings.
Post 11
I've never been good at getting meaning from art :P
It's good to try different styles and colours.
From a good-lookingness point of view, the two faces would look better if they black and white bits were sharper, as if they were done via vectors. The stream of crosses or whatever is rather boring atm; it's just a dense line. I'd suggest varying it up a bit and connecting it to the rest of the picture, it's a problem you can see with a lot of digital designs that try to use a lot of technical stuff or symbols. It's the reason why one well placed symbol can often look better than 500 randomly placed ones.
Post 12
Smiddy is it that you broke up with your woman??
top chick is happy bottom looks angry ..
Post 13
in his deviant art thing he credits them as two different people.
Post 14
Quote from ruin:
I've never been good at getting meaning from art :P
It's good to try different styles and colours.
From a good-lookingness point of view, the two faces would look better if they black and white bits were sharper, as if they were done via vectors. The stream of crosses or whatever is rather boring atm; it's just a dense line. I'd suggest varying it up a bit and connecting it to the rest of the picture, it's a problem you can see with a lot of digital designs that try to use a lot of technical stuff or symbols. It's the reason why one well placed symbol can often look better than 500 randomly placed ones.
when i realised the crosses look bad it was too late to change them, they were very close to being scrapped, but it looked more empty without them